Procedural Writing

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Please Add a TitleWe are learning how to write using the procedure genre.  This is our first attempt explaining how to clean your teeth.

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  1. AnonymousApril 12, 2013 at 2:09 PM

    look like you guy are ready to sleep the whole holidays

    from yusuf room 11

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  2. AnonymousMay 20, 2013 at 12:12 PM

    Wow rm14 you really do know your steps of brushing your teeth.

    By Luciana rm10

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