Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Poem - Home is

Today we wrote poems about our homes.  We had to begin the poem with 'home is' and end with '. . . and that is my home'.  We tried to make sure we incorporated our senses so that we could paint a picture in your mind.  When we had finished we got to illustrate them in kidspix, and read our poem onto the image.  What do you think of them?

8 comments:

  1. Wow great poems room 14, I think I recognise some of those voices :)

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    1. Yes you did. Next time we will remember to say who we are when we read our poems.

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  2. I love your poems and mine too

    From Hamish rm14 HES

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  3. Your poems are cool and they seem as if they were really fun and hard work.Once in my SAGE class last year I did a poem simular to this but I didn't put it on the web because I could not blog.

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  4. Hi my name is Keaton I liked your picture of your house in my regular class last year we made a house like yours in art. But ours stands up.

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    1. That sounds really cool. We would love to see your 3D house.

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  5. We really like your poems. And you thought of a very creative way to publish them. It's fun to hear your voices!

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  6. Hi! How are you? My name is Lorien. You have cool houses
    I wish I could see them in real. Do you have any siblings?

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